Showing posts with label Diana Renn. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Diana Renn. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Haunted Halloween Bits from the SSA Authors

We're sharing our personal haunts this week. Feel free to share your own when you're finished reading -- if you dare.

Scariest book I ever read.....



The Marbury Lens by Andrew Smith, and its sequel Passenger. -- Elle Cosimano



Salem's Lot by Stephen King - "I read it while visiting my aunt over Christmas in sixth grade. She had this old radiator that hissed when it came on and it was right under the window. I didn't sleep the entire time -- but I didn't stop reading the book either!" -- Laura Ellen



 It by Stephen King -- Deron Hicks 


The Hot Zone by Richard Preston -- Elisa Ludwig



The Sandman by Neil Gaiman - "I know it's not really straight-up horror, but some story arcs in that series are profoundly chilling and disturbing." -- Mary McCoy


A House in The Sky by Amanda Lindhout - "Nonfiction, but reads like a novel. Captivity narratives in general freak me out, but this one packs a punch." -- Diana Renn

 

 

 

 Spookiest place I ever visited...

St. Mary's
"I spent four nights in the St. Mary's Art Center in Virginia City, Nevada during the NV SCBWI Mentor Retreat. http://www.hauntedhouses.com/states/nv/saint_mary_louise_hospital.htm" -- Elle Cosimano

Holy Trinity Church
"In college I used to cut through a cemetery to get to work. I t freaked me out every time. I'd get jumpy and hear things -- I took to timing myself to see how quick I could get through." -- Laura Ellen

"Holy Trinity Church in Stratford-upon-Avon. We were there on a cold, overcast day. The grounds surrounding the church are packed with ancient graves. If ghosts are real, that's the place you would find them." -- Deron Hicks

"The cemetery behind my college campus, when a few of us decided to visit at midnight with a Ouija board. " -- Elisa Ludwig
The Capuchin Crypt from debbzie.com

ParaPedia
"The Capuchin Crypt in Rome - each room is decorated wall-to-wall with the bones of friars. In one room, there's a plaque that reads 'What you are now, we once were; what we are now, you shall be.' In another room, a woman's heart is entombed in the wall." -- Mary McCoy

"Zelve National Park in Turkey. Lunar landscape, centuries of buried civilizations, caves, isolated hikes, creepy guys following my husband and I around." -- Diana Renn




The one thing that creeps me out the most. . . 

 

"I really, REALLY dislike spiders and scary clowns." -- Elle Cosimano

"I am with Elle on the clowns -- and dolls with porcelain faces. Just too creepy." -- Laura Ellen

"Snakes. Ugh." -- Deron Hicks

"Rats. And serial killers." -- Elisa Ludwig

"Anything having to do with demon possession I just cannot handle." -- Mary McCoy

"Spiders! I grew up in a house by a lake, and we always got supersize spiders on all our windows. They would spawn more spiders, and eat their dinners right in front of us, and fight -- I am truly traumatized by this." -- Diana Renn



 

The freakiest thing that ever happened to me . . 



"I used to sell real estate. One day, I was showing an historic property (an old farm house built in the 1800s on the edge of a Civil War battlefield) to a lovely couple who were considering a purchase. The house itself had some very strange features. The upstairs bedrooms on both sides of a long, crooked hallway had padlocks that locked from the outside, and the entire house had a very creepy, cold feeling about it. In the dining room, there was a hidden stair behind a door in the wall (an old servant staircase). While we were discussing the property, the door unlatched and swung all the way open, very, very slowly and all three of us felt we weren't alone. Needless to say, we left post haste!" -- Elle Cosimano

"I was staying with my sister in her rental house in Eugene, OR. Alone in the house and taking a shower, l I heard someone yell something outside the bathroom door. When I came out, no one was there, but the microwave was on and I heard a shuffling sound in the living room closet. To get out of the house, I would have had to pass the closet so instead I stood watch  in the hall with a kitchen knife, scared out of my mind, until mys sister and brother-in-law got back a few minutes later. When we checked the closet, no one was in it."  -- Laura Ellen

"My grandmother had a large old photograph of some distant, stern looking relative that she hung in the extra bedroom in her home. The house was old and constantly creaked and groaned. When I was young, I had to sleep in that room. It always seemed that the moonlight would illuminate that photograph. My creepy relative would stare down at me in bed from his spot on the wall as the house creaked and groaned around me." -- Deron Hicks

"I was pretty sure at the time that I saw a UFO during a high school Astronomy Club visit to a field at night. Not sure I'd be as convinced now." -- Elisa Ludwig

"My dorm room sophomore year may have been a little bit haunted. More than once, I saw a shadowy figure standing by the window that disappeared the moment I reached out to touch it. I did some research and found out that somebody had died in my room a few decades before. I might add that I relate this story as a person who doesn't believe in ghosts AT ALL." -- Mary McCoy

"I can't think of one single freaky thing, but I've often felt that I have a vague psychic connection. I will think of someone, or dream something, and soon after find my thoughts or dreams are true, something really happened to that person (nothing horrific), or I will run into that person somewhere. Unfortunately I have not been able to channel this vague, intermittent psychic vibe into anything useful like predicting lottery numbers." -- Diana Renn

Thursday, July 3, 2014

Interrogation Room #43: Diana Renn, author of LATITUDE ZERO


We get pretty amped around here when one of our own sleuths comes out with a new title. Today, we're talking to Diana Renn about her wonderful second book, LATITUDE ZERO. This mystery about a teen who gets caught up in a questionable death during a cycling race is a heart-palpitating, hair-raising ride with wonderful characters and a vivid setting. Here's the synopsis:

“I have to run,” said Juan Carlos. “You will call? Please? It is very important.” “Yes. I will call. Definitely. At two.” 
That’s what Tessa promises. But by two o’clock, young Ecuadorian cycling superstar Juan Carlos is dead, and Tessa, one of the last people ever to speak to him, is left with nothing but questions. The media deems Juan Carlos’s death a tragic accident at a charity bike ride, but Tessa, a teen television host and an aspiring investigative journalist, knows that something more is going on. While she grapples with her own grief and guilt, she is being stalked by spies with an insidious connection to the dead cycling champion. Tessa’s pursuit of an explanation for Juan Carlos’s untimely death leads her from the quiet New England backwoods to bustling bike shops and ultimately to Ecuador, Juan Carlos’s homeland. As the ride grows bumpy, Tessa no longer knows who is a suspect and who is an ally. The only thing she knows for sure is that she must uncover the truth of why Juan Carlos has died and race to find the real villain—before the trail goes cold.
And a little more about Diana:
I write contemporary YA novels featuring globetrotting teens, international intrigue, and more than a dash of mystery. My first novel, TOKYO HEIST (Viking/Penguin), came out in 2012, my next, LATITUDE ZERO, releases July 3, 2014. I am also the Fiction Editor at YARN (Young Adult Review Network), an award-winning online magazine dedicated to short form writing for teens. 


1. This is a highly original story—what sparked the idea, and what personally attracted you to it?

Two ideas fused together in this book, and for a long time I thought they might in fact be two separate books! First, I had an idea that I wanted to write something about Ecuador, because I once lived and worked there. In fact, the earliest seed of this book was probably a short story I wrote called “Latitude Zero,” using a washing machine for a desk, in the patio off of a room I rented. I was interested in writing about a country that was perceived as corrupt, and writing about a person who went there with an off-kilter moral compass, seeking freedom and confronting her own limitations. The story was too big to be contained in a short story, and never really worked, though I revisited the idea and characters for many years.

The second idea I had was for a mystery set in bicycling culture, which, at the elite level, is often seen as corrupt, tainted by doping and cover-ups, in the post-Lance Armstrong world. I played with both ideas and realized they overlapped in a fascinating way, with this issue of corruption. I’m also personally interested in international bike racing, and thought that combining my bike book idea with my Ecuador book idea would let me set this story on a larger stage and significantly raise the stakes.

2. Tessa is a wonderful, relatable protagonist because she's made some bad decisions, but she doesn't want to let these missteps define her, and her quest to solve the mystery of el Cóndor's death is also the quest to redeem herself. What surprised you most about this plucky character?

Thank you! She’s a girl whose moral compass has gone slightly askew, and that can happen to any of us. She has to figure out for herself what it means to be a good person, and to do good things in the world. I knew early on that her personal quest – finding her values -- would be enmeshed in the quest to solve the mystery. What I didn’t realize was how tough she really was. She became quite outspoken, able to advocate for herself and for others, in a way that I had not planned. She also became aware of the very real problems of other people in the world, not just her own problems, and developed more empathy.

3. With so many likely suspects for el Cóndor's death, Tessa has quite a challenge on her hands, and readers are drawn into a head-spinning number of possible explanations. Any tricks for fellow authors who might be managing multiple red herrings in their story?

Yes, there are a lot of suspects. My books are sometimes called “complex mysteries,” and that’s because they deal with more than one crime and quite a few suspects. In LATITUDE ZERO, this happened partly because I wanted the reader to question –as Tessa does—who is good or bad, or what that even means. As a result, many characters end up looking suspicious.

Mostly I have multiple suspects because of the nature of the world in which my crime takes place. Pro cyclists on a team just don’t operate in isolation, and there are people with close access and financial interests in them—which means opportunities and motives abound. In LATITUDE ZERO, an elite cyclist dies under unusual circumstances. In real life, and in this book, many types of people have access to elite cyclists, from managers to mechanics to masseuses. I made a list of everyone who would potentially be involved or implicated, then gradually narrowed it down.

If you have a mystery that takes place in a certain “world” – a sports world, the art world, whatever it is – you do have to think of the people who would have opportunity and motive, list them all, and decide which ones you want to deal with in your book. At least three, to keep the reader guessing, and probably not more than six. And if you cannot make a list of potential suspects, then you may need to widen your character’s world until you can come up with a list. For every person on that list, you should be able to think of a motive and opportunity for crime.

4. You open up new worlds to your readers here, whether it's Ecuadorian culture or competitive cycling. What sort of research did you do for this book? In what ways did your settings inform your plot?

I thought both cultures (Ecuador, cycling) would be relatively easy to portray. I am an amateur cyclist, and I follow professional cycling to some extent – I have passable knowledge of pro-cycling history and the current major players. I lived and worked in Ecuador. However, I still had plenty of research to do. I have never raced, and can barely change my tire – but I have pro cyclists and bike mechanics in the book. I connected online and through local bike shops with people who are in those worlds, and I had experts read my manuscript and vet the details. I was on sturdier ground with Ecuador but still connected with people from there or living there, and had readers check my details and language, since many things have changed since my time there. My sister traveled there for work when I was writing this, and she became my avatar, taking pictures for me, finding resources, and even doing a bike ride!

With both cycling and Ecuadorian culture, the settings gave me clear parameters I could establish and then move around in. Like pins on a map. I could figure out the types of bicycling events, venues, and people I wanted my teen sleuth to cross paths with. Out of that came certain clues, suspects, tools for the crime, and red herrings. In my Ecuadorian setting, I wanted to range all over the country—show the jungle, the Galapagos Islands, everything – but I had to remind myself I was writing a mystery novel, not a Frommer’s Guide. Tessa goes there in the second part of the book, the pace didn’t lend itself to leisurely sightseeing at that point, and I ended up restricting her movements to the capital city, Quito, and immediate environs. I do kind of wish she’d seen more along the way, but the story made certain demands on the setting at that point in the book. That is a hazard of setting suspense fiction abroad. If a character’s life is flashing before her very eyes, she’s probably not admiring Mount Cotopaxi or some baroque building façade. Allowing places for the unique setting to leak in, while keeping the tension high, is a fun challenge.

5. I know that the resolution to this mystery changed through your drafts. Can you talk about that process (without spoilers, of course)? How important is it for a mystery writer to know the ending from the very beginning and what tips would you offer to another writer who's rethinking hers?

I thought I knew the ending, but I was wrong. Then I was wrong again! I had my criminals all mixed up, and I even changed a big part of the crime. I spent a lot of time writing and then realizing things were not working, then deleting and starting over. That wasn’t very efficient, but I got great character insights and fresh ideas along the way. The main crime and the related crimes had to fit together. I felt like I was building an intricate machine, or a motor, and something kept rattling around and I’d have to take it apart again. And again. I think with some books you just have to try writing ideas and see if they work, and this was one of those. But what I’ve now just learned from my third book is this: if you can write mini-outlines of where you are headed, and float those ideas by trusted readers or critique partners before you do the actual writing, that can really help. Figure out the logic “off the page” as much as you can, so you will have fewer words to throw out if you find you’re heading in the wrong direction.


6. One of the things I love most about this book is the way you handle the villains. They're believably wrong without ever getting too mustache-twirly. Do you have any tips on conjuring up complex bad guys?

Thank you! I love mustache-twirlers, but those are stock characters and best avoided, so everyone here got a clean shave. I think villains are intriguing when they have complicated pasts, and when there are things about them that are relatable and even likable. Or perhaps they have lost sight of their original goals, or made a series of poor decisions, or made some horrible mistake, or told some lies, or done the wrong things for the right reasons. They’re human. I think it also helped me that my villains changed during the writing of this book, and so I had already done a lot of character exploration and seen these people as complex and multi-faceted before they got the villain label in my mind. Once I made firm decisions, it was a matter of going back and teasing out the bad behavior and thinking a lot about their pasts, who they were before the bad stuff, and how that informed their motivations.

7. This is your second book. What were some of the challenges in following up your debut novel? What was easier this time around?

People say the second novel is hard, and they’re right. You have less time to write it, and more voices in your head, and, in this case, people with financial investments in it. That’s a lot to carry around. New pressures. I did have to shake all that off at some point and just write it for myself and have fun with the writing. A big advantage I had this time around? Knowing that I was writing a mystery, from the outset. With TOKYO HEIST, I had written a book with “mysterious elements” that became a traditional mystery over the course of multiple revisions. So I had better planning going into this. And I learned so much from working with my fantastic editor, Leila Sales, that I had her voice in my head coaching me along the way. Pacing and scene management were much, much easier to execute. I had more tools in my writer’s toolbox. I knew what I needed to do, structurally.

8. At this point, I'd say you're the reigning queen of the teen travel mystery! What excites you about this genre?

Ooh – queen of the teen travel mystery? How fun is that!

So I think the teen mystery genre is just exploding. So many great mysteries have come out over the past several years, and keep coming out . . .  I can barely keep up! (For a partial list, check out the ongoing roster of all the YA mystery authors listed on our blog!). And all these great teen mysteries just keep raising the bar, making it harder for all of us! Especially when you get mind-blowing, genre-crossing mysteries . .. mystery + sci fi, mystery + paranormal, mystery + historical . . . I’m in awe every time I read about new publishing deals or forthcoming books.

I love the challenge of writing a complex YA mystery plot while simultaneously focusing on character development. Readers are demanding—they want fully realized characters AND plot twists, clues, suspense, all that. I think that’s why a lot of the YA mysteries on the market are quite long, compared to the classic Nancy Drews. We’re spinning a lot of plates, resolving mystery plots and character arcs and subplots all at once.

In terms of the teen travel mystery—I’m not sure if that’s a full-fledged genre yet, but I hope it will be. We need more books with international settings and diverse casts; why not mysteries? There are certainly lots of contemporary teen novels out there already in which travel figures prominently. I love books where teens travel partly because I had a huge case of wanderlust as a teen, and never got to travel until I was older. And partly because so many teens today are really out there traveling the world—volunteering, working, studying, visiting family, adventuring, exploring. There are more opportunities than there used to be, and fiction should reflect that. Teen travel mysteries present exciting opportunities for teens to unravel mysteries, encounter something new and unfamiliar, get lost, and find themselves in the process.

9. What are you working on now?

I’m in the editing phase of my third novel, BLUE VOYAGE. This one takes place in Turkey, and it’s about a teen girl who gets entangled with an international gang of antiquities smugglers. It’s coming out next summer. It’s been so much fun to write, to take a virtual trip to Turkey, and kind of refreshing to have the whole book take place there. And the main character is a real departure for me. I’m having so much fun with her voice and her complex circumstances.

10. IR Classic Question: Anything you'd care to reveal under the pressure of interrogation?


Here I am writing and talking about bikes and bicycle advocacy and sports . . . yet I have not ridden my own bike in nearly a year! Both the tires are flat and it’s literally gathering dust. My excuse? I was in a chair for the past year, writing and editing this book! (And then the next one!) But I will soon, very soon, be out on the road once more. If  I could bike and write simultaneously, that would be ideal.

Learn more about Diana and LATITUDE ZERO:
Find her on websiteTwitter and Facebook.

Tuesday, December 17, 2013

12 Days of Mysteries: Day 7

Welcome back to 12 Days of Mysteries! It's Day 7, and on deck today we have suggestions for two YA mysteries that might be a little . . . incognito. That is, stories that might not be packaged as mysteries, yet they deal with crime or detective work in a way that's appealing to mystery fans.

Mary McCoy suggests OUT OF THE EASY, by Ruta Sepatys. "Some mystery elements and a whole lot of crime in this one, one of my faves of 2013," says Mary.

Until she was 11, Josie Moraine was raised in a Big Easy brothel by a house full of prostitutes - one of them her own mother. Since then, she's more or less raised herself, nurturing a dream of attending Smith College and crafting a plan to escape her city, her past, and her mother's reputation. However, when Josie's mother flees town with her gangster boyfriend on the heels of a murder, Josie finds herself sucked back into the underworld she's trying to escape. Set in 1950s New Orleans, Out of the Easy is a feast of a book: there's mystery, romance, scandal, crime, and a winning heroine who's got book smarts and street smarts to spare.

Diana Renn says, "I recently read  Just One Day,  by Gayle Forman, looking for a diversion from mystery and a tale of adventures abroad. There were adventures abroad, all right -- it's a really compelling story about a girl on a post-graduation tour of Europe, who meets a guy acting in a Shakespeare play and impulsively follows him to France for twenty-four hours. But it's there's also a healthy dose of mystery here. When the guy disappears after their one night together, Allyson spends the next year of her life -- at college and then back in Europe-- trying to find answers to her unresolved questions about those twenty four hours. She also tries to find the guy himself. Allyson turns into an amateur sleuth in her personal missing person case, roping in appealing sidekicks and making friends along the way. And kudos to Forman for making online sleuthing so interesting!"

Allyson Healey's life is exactly like her suitcase—packed, planned, ordered. Then on the last day of her three-week post-graduation European tour, she meets Willem. A free-spirited, roving actor, Willem is everything she’s not, and when he invites her to abandon her plans and come to Paris with him, Allyson says yes. This uncharacteristic decision leads to a day of risk and romance, liberation and intimacy: 24 hours that will transform Allyson’s life. A book about love, heartbreak, travel, identity, and the "accidents” of fate, Just One Day shows us how sometimes in order to get found, you first have to get lost. . . and how often the people we are seeking are much closer than we know.


Have you ever read a book that wasn't packaged as a mystery, but you secretly suspect that it is? We'd love to hear about it!

Friday, December 13, 2013

12 Days of Mysteries: Day 5

It's Day 5 of our 12 Days of Mysteries, demystifying holiday gift-giving for book lovers! Today we're mixing it up and NOT giving our usual book suggestions. If you're looking for a book-related idea that's a little different, check out these programs and charities!

Laura Ellen recommends the Letters in the Mail program as a great kid gift. Authors send subscribers a letter in the mail each month for only $5 a month.

Elisa Ludwig suggests Girls Write Now, which works with high school girls in NYC's public schools to help develop their writing and provide other opportunities for intellectual/emotional growth and career development. Elisa says, "Last year my agent made a holiday donation to the organization in my honor, and this year I want to continue the tradition!


Do you know a budding writer working on a young adult, middle grade, or new adult manuscript? Why not give them a manuscript critique! No, you don't have to do that yourself; you can outsource it! Diana Renn recommends a great freelance editing service run by four kidlit authors called -- clearly enough -- Manuscript Critique Services. (Clarity -- trust us, you want that in an editor!) And . . . do you have a writer in your life who is going the indie publishing route? Or who needs help with graphic design? Send them to Renee Combs Design for all their design needs and even help with promotion!

Miss any of our Days of Mysteries? Looking for kidlit mystery/thriller books that would make great gifts? Scroll back in time here:
Day One
Day Two
Day Three
Day Four



Thursday, December 12, 2013

12 Days of Mysteries: Day 4

The clock is ticking. Faster. Faster. Your heart is in your throat as December 25 bears down on you. Your shopping isn't done. In fact, you haven't even started!

If you have young thriller fans in your life, we can save you. To celebrate Day 4 of our 12 Days of Mysteries (and thrillers) are some thrillers that are sure to make great gifts!


Elle Cosimano says, "I LOVED 'THE LOCK ARTIST' by Steve Hamilton. This beautifully written and character-driven thriller unfolds slowly, and non-linearly, drawing out the reveal for an intense and satisfying conclusion." This book one the Edgar Award for YA in 2011. Here's the description:
 
 
 
"I was the Miracle Boy, once upon a time. Later on, the Milford Mute. The Golden Boy. The Young Ghost. The Kid. The Boxman. The Lock Artist. That was all me.
But you can call me Mike." 
 
Marked by tragedy, traumatized at the age of eight, Michael, now eighteen, is no ordinary young man. Besides not uttering a single word in ten years, he discovers the one thing he can somehow do better than anyone else. Whether it's a locked door without a key, a padlock with no combination, or even an eight-hundred pound safe ... he can open them all. It's an unforgivable talent. A talent that will make young Michael a hot commodity with the wrong people and, whether he likes it or not, push him ever close to a life of crime. Until he finally sees his chance to escape, and with one desperate gamble risks everything to come back home to the only person he ever loved, and to unlock the secret that has kept him silent for so long.


Avast! How about a thriller at sea? With pirates? Diana Renn really enjoyed the newly-released YA thriller by Nick Lake, HOSTAGE THREE. "I'm always looking for good YA fiction set in different countries. This unusual thriller takes us off the coast of Somalia, where a yacht is taken over by pirates. This is a character-driven thriller that will get you shifting your perspectives and redrawing your lines of allegiance, over and over again."

 Here's the official summary:

The last thing Amy planned to do this summer was sail around the world trapped on a yacht with her father and her stepmother. Really, all she wanted was to fast-forward to October when she’ll turn
eighteen and take control of her own life. Aboard the Daisy May, Amy spends time sunbathing, dolphin watching and forgetting the past as everything floats by . . . until one day in the Gulf of Aden another boat appears. A boat with guns and pirates – the kind that kill.

Immediately, the pirates seize the boat and its human cargo. Hostage One is Amy’s father – the most valuable. Hostage Two: her stepmother. And Hostage Three is Amy, who can’t believe what’s happening. As the ransom brokering plays out, Amy finds herself becoming less afraid, and even
stranger still, drawn to one of her captors, a teenage boy who wants desperately to be more than who he has become. Suddenly it becomes brutally clear that the price of life and its value are two very different things . .
 


Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Creative License: When NOT To Research

Confession: I'm an ex-academic. I languished in a Ph.D. program for years, endlessly researching an uninspired dissertation that I ended up never finishing. My long experiment with graduate school is a story for another post, I guess ("Why Pursuing a Ph.D. Should Be a Calling, Not a Fallback Option During an Economic Recession." Or, "Why You Should Cut Loose Your Safety Net -- Because It's Not So Safe!")

In those years I spent training to be a literary critic and a scholar, I developed a facility for research. That's good, right? Yes. I knew how to find information, and fast.

But I also developed a certain defensiveness.

In grad school, we were always on the defense, fortifying ourselves against professors who probed for intellectual potholes, or opportunistic young colleagues eager to knock down our arguments in a seminar and score a few points for themselves.

Or maybe it wasn't like that at all. Maybe I simply had a luxury of time back then to overthink, and to worry, and this is what sent me scurrying to the library day after day after day.

That need for research eventually carried into my fiction writing. First I wrote historical novels (not published), which might have still been that unwritten dissertation, in new clothes.

Then I wrote a mystery (Tokyo Heist) which centered on worlds that interested me greatly, but that I knew little about, initially: art conservation, the Japanese yakuza, Vincent van Gogh, Japanese woodblock prints, manga . . . if I didn't know about it, I was determined to find out about it and put it in my book!

With all the research I had to do, it's no wonder that book took eight years to write.

That pace is unsustainable, of course, for an aspiring career novelist. So when I had to write my next mystery -- with a book contract and a deadline -- I knew I didn't have the luxury of researching every detail.

For my forthcoming Latitude Zero, I chose a topic a little closer to home for me -- bicycling, a sport that I do -- and a country, Ecuador, where I once lived and worked. However, as I rounded out my main character's world, I realized I still had to do some research. (How do bike mechanics work? How are professional racing teams organized? How has Ecuador changed since I lived there over a decade ago?) But this time, I saved most of my research for after the first draft. I tried to get the story straight before I worried too much about facts. This saved me hours -- maybe weeks or months -- of research that was not needed, research I might have been tempted to shoehorn awkwardly into my plot.

I also found creative freedom in writing this book by letting go of the need to research every last detail myself. I had experts in various fields read the manuscript and vet facts or descriptions that I was worried about.

And a few things, I let go of completely.

I have a scene, for example, where a character is trapped in a shipping container with a whole bunch of bikes. In the past, worried about getting this key scene right, I would have arranged to see a shipping container packed with bikes up close. Not impossible. There's a bike shop here in Boston that packs up containers with bikes to send overseas, and they're always looking for volunteers. I volunteered at an art museum as part of my research for Tokyo Heist, so I thought I would do similar hands-on research with this book.

It wasn't easy. I tried on four separate occasions to get to a bike container load so I could see what it looked like firsthand. Family obligations got in the way every time. I was not a parent when I drafted my first book. Now I am. I don't have the luxury of time to immerse myself in every aspect my main character's worlds, as I had done before.

Beta readers looked at the scene -- and said it was gripping. I finally saw the light. I didn't need to research the life out of that scene. It was enough for me to watch a video of a shipping container bike load, to study some pictures of how the containers were locked, and then go write the scene. Readers were not likely to complain that my portrayal was not realistic. After all, how many people have been locked in a shipping container with 400 bikes? I'm guessing not many. If anyone came forward to accuse me of inaccuracy ("being trapped in a shipping container isn't like that at all!"), they'd be few and far between. So I decided to give myself some creative license and make up the experience myself. And it was fun!

In that spirit, towns in my book -- once real -- were demolished, and rebuilt as fictional entities. This freed me from the need to go out and check road signs and intersections and travel times from point A to point B. And after fruitlessly looking for a charity bike ride that my main characters might embark on, I made one up from scratch, including a route and all the logistics.

I still think research is important. Incorrect facts can pull readers right out of a book. And I still have a fat binder of research that I did for this new book -- and I still ended up venturing into unknown worlds, because I love to explore and to learn. But I've also learned to be more focused, more selective, in my information-gathering. We can let research take over, or become an excuse for not writing. As novelists, we have the license to make up a whole bunch of stuff. We should embrace our creative freedom -- and run from the temptation to over-research!

What about you? Do you tend to do too much research? Too little? How do you find a balance? When in the process do you do your research?

PS . . . have you entered SLEUTHAPALOOZA, our biggest giveaway yet? Help us celebrate our two-year anniversary and enter to win, or help spread the word! 

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Diana Renn grew up in Seattle and now lives outside of Boston with her husband and young son. Her first novel, TOKYO HEIST (Viking/Penguin) came out in 2012. Her next YA mystery, LATITUDE ZERO, will be published by Viking in July 2014. She is also the Fiction Editor at YARN (Young Adult Review Network).


Thursday, October 18, 2012

What do Readers Expect from Mysteries and Thrillers?

 Last week I hosted a monthly Twitter chat with fellow members of the Apocalypsies (a group of 140+ kidlit authors debuting in 2012). Fellow Sleuths Spies & Alibis members Laura Ellen, Talia Vance, and F.T. Bradley were among the participants, weighing in our topic of mysteries and thrillers.

A lot of interesting points came out of this discussion. I've been mulling over two of them.

1. The distinction between mysteries and thrillers. Sometimes these terms get used interchangeably. For books that have elements of both genres (such as Laura Ellen's BLIND SPOT), using both terms to describe them is fine. Many books, though, fall firmly in one genre or another, and readers may be misled by the wrong label. For example, sometimes my book, TOKYO HEIST, is described as a thriller. While it has its share of danger and thrilling moments, I would call it a mystery. A puzzle drives the plot. In the Twitter chat, we defined mystery as a story that revolves around a puzzle to be solved, and a thriller as a story focused on immediate, pressing dangers. Both mysteries and thrillers have tension, but problem-solving drives the tension in mystery and action/danger (or psychological suspense) drives the tension in thrillers.

2. Readers' expectations of mysteries and thrillers. We talked a lot about Nancy Drew (I admit we weren't exactly kind to her) and how YA/MG mysteries today have changed from the classic sleuthing stories. Technology, some of us felt, was a big factor. As Kristen Kittscher pointed out on this blog a few weeks ago ("Murder, She Blogged"), technology has totally changed investigative work in real life and in fiction.

But maybe other things have changed too, raising our expectations for YA/MG mysteries and thrillers. As Talia mentioned, Nancy Drew didn't solve (or even have) her own problems; she solved other people's problems. We don't have a sense of her as a real person; one participant in the discussion couldn't even remember Nancy's boyfriend's name. (It's Ned).

It seems that it's no longer satisfying -- it may even be laughable -- to have a series with a character who just bounces from adventure to adventure. We now expect:
  • More character depth
  • More plot twists and turns
  • More action
  • More details
  • Faster/better pacing
  • Some degree of realism
  • Emotional impact
In short: More.

Whew. Much as I tend to agree with all this, I find myself missing Nancy a little. Life seemed simpler then. Well, mystery writing did, anyway.

Are any of these criteria for modern-day mysteries at odds? Can we have "better pacing" and "more action" while still reaching for more character depth and realism than a Nancy Drew type of sleuth? Character development does sometimes get sacrificed a bit to service plot or pace in mystery -- can we really have it all?

YA author A.C. Gaughen suggested, towards the end of the Twitter chat, that "with more books, more authors, more competition, the bar gets raised." Readers don't just want a good mystery; they want "GOOD FICTION."

Are mysteries and/or thrillers harder to write than ever? Is the bar raising because there are so many being published? Do we really expect mysteries/thrillers to have it all these days? (Even in middle grade/young adult markets, where word counts tend to be shorter?) How can mystery/thriller writers overcome the potential paralysis of trying to write the mystery/thriller that Has It All?

What do you think? What do you expect from YA/MG mysteries and/or thrillers? What would you like to see more of -- or less of?

[PS - Have you entered this week's great giveaway yet? No? There's still time to win a signed copy of the just-released DOUBLE VISION by our own F.T. Bradley! Check out her great interview with W.H. Beck from Tuesday; the contest entry form is right below it. Oh - and how cool is it to have two initials before your last name? It just occurred to me that F.T. and two other blog members do this. I think I'm gong to declare a Double Initial Day in honor of DOUBLE VISION!]


D.C. Renn (aka Diana Renn) was born in Seattle and now lives outside of Boston with her husband and son. TOKYO HEIST (Viking/Penguin, published June 2012) is her first novel.



Wednesday, October 3, 2012

Interrogation Room #20: KATHRYN BURAK, author of Emily's Dress and Other Missing Things

Today we're interrogating debut author Kathryn Burak!

Kathryn teaches at Boston University. She has also published stories, poems, and textbooks. EMILY'S DRESS AND OTHER MISSING THINGS  is her first novel.

Since her novel is hot off the press -- just released by Roaring Brook/Macmillan yesterday -- we thought we'd haul her in and find out all about EMILY'S DRESS AND OTHER MISSING THINGS, and find out, well, about other things too. Like her writing process, and her "Replenishing the Shelves" project.

And we hope we'll learn a thing or two about her partner in crime -- a poet who may be guilty of overusing certain punctuation marks -- and who remains a bit . . . elusive . . .  
Recognize this mug shot?
About EMILY'S DRESS:
Claire has been through so much that she’s pared her life down to one goal–to get out of high school (finally)–until the night she wanders into Emily Dickinson’s house and finds everything suddenly changing. Claire, new to Amherst and desperate to get out of high school, vows she’ll try to be invisible. She retreats deep into thee poetry of Emily Dickinson to help her understand her mother’s suicide and best friend’s disappearance, until one night, when she finds herself running through the woods in the poet’s dress. The next morning she starts a different life, one with totally new complications.

Here's Diana Renn's interview with Kathryn Burak!

DR: I love how this novel revolves around not one but TWO mysteries (or crimes): a stolen dress and an unresolved missing person case from the past. It’s not a classically plotted “whodunit” or “where is it.” Yet I wouldn’t hesitate to call it a mystery. When did you realize you had a mystery on your hands, albeit an unconventional one? 

KB: I love mysteries—especially real-life mysteries--and I’m so flattered that someone would think of me as a writer of mysteries.  I’m a sucker for those TV shows like 48 Hours, that run through the clues to a crime.  And like a lot of people, I have always been intrigued Emily Dickinson. There was only one photo taken of her before she became a recluse;  she avoided people.  What was that all about?  Why did she shy away from society?  She’s become almost a cult figure.  And one day I heard a story on NPR about a Welsh, alt rock musician who disappeared without a trace from London in 1995.  There’s something irresistible about missing person stories, especially this one, about a guy who carved things into his own flesh.  In fact, the boy who is missing in my book is named Richy after this missing musician, Richey Edwards. Like Dickinson, Edwards has a kind of cult following, too.  So, I knew I wanted to have a disappearance in the story, but I wasn’t sure how it would feature into the story until I was asked to cut a 20,000-word subplot from the first draft.  Then the crime elements rose to the surface of the plot to carry the book.

DR: In addition to the mystery plot, there are so many fascinating components to this novel, including poetry and creative writing, Emily Dickinson, a father/daughter relationship, romance, friendship, and healing from a dual loss. Can you identify the earliest idea(s) you had for this novel, or a starting point for you?
KB: I knew the story I wanted to write was about survival and hope.  And, I knew I wanted a female character who could be loved because of her strength, talent, and humor, but who had also lost someone very important to her.  And then, one day I took my son to a poetry reading by Robert Pinsky.  He was reading his translation of Dante’s Inferno to an audience of high-school teachers.  There were some young teachers in the audience, and one was a nice-looking guy who made me wonder how female students could possibly concentrate if he read them poetry. One of the lines Pinsky read was something like ‘then my hunger had power over my grief.’  And that was it—the idea that the main character in my book would feel her urge to live life--her hunger to write and love and live--was more powerful than her grief. And how could I resist that the story involve a handsome student teacher who loves poetry?

Emily's sleeve
DR: Claire feels a special connection with Emily Dickinson, and she sees the world through a poet’s eyes. I love that we see some of her own poetry, as well as Emily’s, interspersed in the narrative. Her language is beautiful. What is your background with Emily Dickinson and with poetry? Are you also a poet? 
KB: When I was in college I fell in love with poetry.  But this was influenced by my mom, who used to say, “I’m nobody.  Are you nobody too?” when I was little.  I think she gave me my first taste of the power of poetry, how it can really speak directly to a person with just a few, beautiful words. So I went to graduate school to get an MFA in poetry.  But after I graduated, I found myself gravitating to stories.  Still, I read lots of poetry because I admire the form so much. 

DR: Having lived in Amherst myself, and experienced the eerie enchantment of Emily Dickinson in that town, I loved the setting of this story. Did you live there or travel there for research?  
KB: I went to graduate school in Amherst, and I would end my morning runs at Emily Dickinson’s grave—just, you know, stop by to say good morning.  When I was getting ready to graduate and move to North Carolina for my first job, someone wrote a mystery called something like “Emily Dickinson is Dead.”  And I was so jealous.  I thought, ‘someday I’m going to write a mysterious story set in Emily’s town.” Now I get to visit because my daughter is in college in the area. The atmosphere is so charged with excitement from all the students, it’s hard not to imagine lots of great stories happening there.


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DR: Tell us about the Replenishing the Shelves Project and how people can help.
KB: When I visited the Dickinson museum in Amherst, Emily Dickinson’s house, I found out that all of the books owned by the family had been gifted to Harvard and Brown Universities, so the shelves of the libraries are bare.  The museum started a project to buy the original editions to fill the shelves back up.  Since a lot of my book takes place at the museum, I found myself wanting to give something back.  I said to the director, Jane Wald, “Will you allow me to use my book to help buy Emily’s books?”  She thought it was a great idea, and we are teaming up.  I have a couple of projects over at my website kathrynburak.com (Emily’s Missing Books) and you can find out more about how you might contribute directly at http://www.emilydickinsonmuseum.org/books.


DR: The concept of time in this novel is complex, and you handle it so well. Past tragedies and mysteries encroach on the present. Claire’s memories are easily triggered by a line of verse, or an image with symbolic weight. Yet we don’t get bogged down in the past; it’s deftly woven into the narrative. You also move us forward in time very effectively, writing a page-turning mystery that unfolds over the course of an entire school year – an unusual breadth of time in a mystery, and even in a YA novel, I might argue. How did you handle these various time frames when you wrote? Did you outline events or did the writing happen more organically? 
KB: When I knew I was going to have a student teacher involved with a student—although she is only 2 years younger than he is, I also knew I would have to deal with how the relationship is  still a little unexpected, just a tad taboo. A relationship like this was going to take time to develop, time to work out and make convincing, especially since I wanted the reader to root for them, to understand they are good together.  I decided it would take at least 9 months to earn that kind of connection, so I had to pace the story.  I didn’t outline, but I knew it would take a whole school year for the story to happen.  The tension of their pairing—will they meet again?—was what I wanted to focus on.

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DR: I see you’ve been previously published in literary magazines, and your writing feels quite literary for me. It’s wonderful to see literary fiction for young adults. Did you always plan to write a novel for teens? How conscious were you of audience as you wrote this book? 
KB: I have published in literary magazines, but my stories always involved children, teens, or young adults.  I love reading literary fiction for young adults because it feels so hopeful and full of possibility.  I published a story years ago about a 10-year-old Japanese girl whose mother dies of breast cancer and she has to figure out how to get to know her very distant father.  After that story came out, a publisher approached me and asked me if I’d like to write a novel for young adults.  This was a little before Harry Potter came around and made YA and Middle Grade novels so high-profile. I said, what is a YA novel?  Honestly, I get confused when people make fun of adults reading YA novels.  I think good writing is good writing and it doesn’t need any label.  At the same time, I consciously wanted to speak to teens about hope and self-worth.

DR: What writing secret will you reveal only under the harsh light of this interrogation room?
KB: Sometimes you have to let your characters do what they feel like doing—you have to listen to them.  They’ll really surprise you when you do that—let them tell you what they want to do rather than you always planning what they are going to do.  Put them in a scene and let them run the show.  I can’t tell you how surprised I was the day my main character, Claire, ended up in a cemetery wearing Emily Dickinson’s dress.  I was like, what just happened?  But you know what had just happened?  I found my story’s fulcrum--because I let Claire have a say.

Thanks, Kathryn!

I can't find Emily Dickinson's dress, but here's where to find Kathryn Burak online:
Her website
The Class of 2K12
Facebook
Twitter: @DressWriter

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